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Gaia's Flower Novel Extras by =FYI411dragonlover:iconFYI411dragonlover:

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Author's Comments

This is for the story I'm currently writing. There will be more characters, and there will probably be more terms as well, but these are only what I currently have. I will try to update his as I update my personal Story plan on my computer, but I will probably forget... Oh well, I'll try my best! :D

P.S. Sorry for the surplus of spelling/ gramar mistakes, It's my sole weakness...

EDIT: Please, no stealing my ideas, no downloading, ect. I know a lot of my other literature peices, I ask for other deviant's to do their own version- but not this time. This is extremely important to me and I ask that no one use my story line.

Otsana: [link]
Jenesis: [link]
angel: [link]
fae, angel, water nymph: [link]

And just to clear up a hazzy subject, the three worlds aren't like planets in the galaxy. They're three different dimensions. (I know, my spelling sucks).

I have a web site for the novels that is up but still being worked on. The address is <www.gaiaflowertrinity.art.officelive.com> (but without the < and > on the ends). [link]

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=FYI411dragonlover Jul 1, 2009, 6:10:31 PM
PLEASE! NO downloading! I don't know how to make this any clearer!

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~maytheflower Aug 18, 2009, 10:11:18 AM
you could just use a creative commons

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rush says the water
hush says the sky
free says the land
love says the tree
calm says the storm
and you and me
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=FYI411dragonlover Aug 18, 2009, 5:08:19 PM
I don't know how to use creative commons

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~maytheflower Aug 20, 2009, 1:23:22 PM
down at the bottom it says something about licensing and that and you can click use creative commons

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rush says the water
hush says the sky
free says the land
love says the tree
calm says the storm
and you and me
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~KiaraAkira Aug 22, 2009, 4:59:30 AM
I really like it. It's a great plot idea ^^ The characters are very detailed and have really interesting names. I like how all the names you used, you knew the origin and the meaning of it. And they seem to go along with the story. All and All, I think that it sounds like a great story and I'm looking forward to reading some of it if you plan on posting it :)

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Human Kind cannot gain anything without first giving
something in return to obtain something of equal value
must be lost that is alchemys first law of equivalent
exchange in those days we really believed it to be the
worlds one and only truth
~Al
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=FYI411dragonlover Aug 22, 2009, 6:03:52 AM
Thank you! :writersblock: :typerhappy: :bow:

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~erDras Aug 22, 2009, 4:38:45 PM
Hey hello! I just read the comment you left in my profile ^_^

I really liked the idea of the tree worlds and the Earth serving to bring balance between Essence and Tecnica (Those are amazing names by the way).

All I can suggest you is to take a special care in the way you make Gaia travel from the Earth to Essence for the first time, as there are a lot of stories about people traveling to others worlds already, so it could be a good thing to be original at it :)

Let me tell you again that I really liked the main idea. Hope to read it once you have finished it :)

(Sorry if I make any mistake while writing, english is no my natural language and I'm still learning).

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El talento es pura gana de fastidiar a los demás.
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=FYI411dragonlover Aug 23, 2009, 4:59:32 AM
Thank you very much! :D I appreciate your help! :D

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~CCrystal14 Aug 24, 2009, 11:08:21 AM
This idea is very nice, and I wouldn't hesitate to read it.

Its evident that so far you've taken special care in this story. And by that I mean you've picked very good names for everything, ranging from planets to people.

I don't see anything worth critiquing, but I'd like to mention that this story has great potential, and it can teach great lessons if handled carefully. So I wish you luck.

As for a title, I'm fresh out ^^; Perhaps you could use something general, like Balance. Or you could do a bit of research like you (possibly) did with the names and find something that you think suits your story. I find, though, that if you simply write and write, a good title will come. Maybe you could use a word that reminds you of your story.

All in all, this story seems very interesting and I hope to see it completed one day =) I hope I've helped in some sense ^^;
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